Publisher: R.E.B. Books
Molly: House on
Fire
is the story of Molly Kincaid. Years
before she left a town that never treated her or her mother very well and now
she’s come home, reluctantly. Molly has
a new name and is a successful lawyer, but she can’t overcome the hurt of the
past. When her mother was murdered, only
one police officer cared enough to pay any attention and now he has died. Molly
has returned to repay a debt by defending his grandson against a charge of
murdering his own mother and walks into a mystery that ties the two events
together. Molly also meets her match in
Leslie Walker, the specialist who works with her client. Together they discover that the town has
changed in many ways, but not some of the most important ones.
This
was an enjoyable story, slightly predictable, but with characters that hold the
reader’s attention. It will keep you
reading; however, there are some problems.
There are a lot of mistakes in the beginning of the book. That includes misspellings, words missing and
words used incorrectly. For example, at
one point a character walks down the “isle” of a store. Silly errors like that should have been
picked up by the editor. In fact, an
editor should have done a lot of work on this book. There were many extraneous scenes that drag
the story out and do nothing to move the plot forward. They could have been easily eliminated. The paperback copy was sloppily produced with
uneven margins and too much white space.
All they do is make the book longer.
If
the reader ignores the physical problems with the book, there is an enjoyable
story there. With a little more care to
its production, it could have been outstanding.
The ebook has formatting issues too, with weird sentence breaks, dropped words, & empty lines in the wrong places, which made for slightly irritating reading. I did really like the book, though, and it definitely kept my attention.
ReplyDeleteAllison, there are no issues like that in my copies of the ebook. Would you mind telling me where you purchased it? I'd like to know if it was an actual formatting issue or one caused by conversion to another format, as I cannot see any of those errors in either my epub or prc file. I'm sure my formatter would like to know if there is a problem we can correct. If you would like another copy, one without the errors, please contact me. rebradshawbooks@gmail.com
DeleteThanks for reading the book.
R. E. Bradshaw.