I just discovered this "lesbian" book was written by a man. That probably explains a lot.
Publisher: Smashwords
What
can ruin the joy of reading a book? How
about if the plot seems to go nowhere? Or if the characters are unappealing? Worse, if the reader can’t tell the
characters apart. Maybe if the book is
poorly produced. The answer is a book
that combines all of those problems and more.
Moonglow is supposed to be a story about fashion
models and entertainers set in the future not too far away. The major characters are Rena Hilst, a famous
model who takes advantage of every chance to sleep with other women, and her
supposed partner Shell Dawes, the head of Moonglow Model Management. Shell is more than willing to overlook Rena’s
infidelity because Rena doesn’t love the other women. She just enjoys having sex with them. Rena’s behavior doesn’t seem that far out of
line when everyone around her is doing the same thing. The book is one model or entertainer after
another cheating on her girlfriend or partner, all in good fun, of course. The crisis at the end is how long Shell is
willing to put up with this behavior.
The
blurb for this book says Rena never hunts for people to cheat with, but does
this because she honestly cares for the people she’s with. Apparently, she cares for them more than her
long-suffering partner. The first
problem with this is that there is never anything shown about Rena that makes
her appealing except her “great” beauty.
She’s spoiled, selfish and a drug addict. Her partner is just as irritating for the way
she puts up with the behavior and then provides excuses for it. The reader might want to slap Shell and ask
her what the devil is wrong with her self-esteem. For someone who is supposed to be the head of
the most powerful corporation around, Shell has an appalling lack of the
decisiveness that good executives usually possess. The next problem is that the characters are
so one dimensional and identical in what they do that they’re difficult to tell
apart or to like. Basically, there is
the cheating partner and the hapless, pathetic partner. Even worse, the cheaters madly proclaim their
love for their partners and then go right out and cheat again. If it’s not cheating, it’s drugs or
liquor. The reader might ask why anyone
would want to be around these women, but the answer is that they’re all behaving
the same, so they hardly notice what they’re doing. Besides, when they’re caught, the cheaters
are forgiven.
The
story is supposed to be a sort of science fiction, but the references are
confusing. They are basically limited to
some unclear comments about transportation, communication and the materials
that the models’ outfits are made of.
The scenes ramble from page to page without it being clear what point
the author is making. At the end Romo
tries to reaffirm the power of love, but her characters are so unappealing,
they don’t make very good examples of the idea.
A
good editor might have saved this book.
There are fragments of a decent story, though they are difficult to
find. Moonglow’s greatest sin
is that, by the end, the reader probably won’t care. Save your money. There are much better books to enjoy.
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